Dylawrence's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Console Buddies]

It seems original

I enjoyed the concept, and here's some pointers so you can update it!

Sound-

-Go to the file tab (top left,) publish settings, click on the flash tab, and at the bottom there should be the sound quality. I'd put that at 48 kbps. so there won't be any cracking...

-Make sure all your sound clips used in the flash are set to stream (not event!) That makes sure the sound plays in sync with the animation perfectly, no matter what.
To do this, click on a sound clip on the time frame (with all the keyframes and whatnot) and at the bottom of the screen under "Properties" you should see "Sync" and make sure it says stream next to it...

-Animation

-I noticed you motion tweened the Wii/360 in the Mission Impossible scene from facing left to right. This creates an undesirable squishing effect, and the cause of this is because you used the same symbol, and flipped it horizontally during a tween.
The solution, would be to make each console a symbol were they're facing directly forward, so when they look the other way, have one symbol looking left, switch it with the one facing forward, and then switch that with the first symbol, then just flip it around.

After you make all these changes press Ctrl+Enter to view it the way we will view it on Newgrounds.com after you submit the changed version...

Does that help at all?

I'm giving it an 8 because I believe that with these changes, that's what it deserves... Good job overall guys!

LoveShineHero responds:

Well That helped a whole lot thanks dude! im glad you liked it |Plus penmis

[Ferrets]

It's no spatula madness...

but the first time I saw this I thought that was swell!

I notice old stuff coming to newgrounds... does that mean spatula madness next?

[Superfly: Bongzai!]

Holy shit, you're back!

Man it's been such a long time since I've seen your toons.
Let me just say that you've still got it man, you still have the same humor, and you can still make flash that makes people laugh.

Please keep making flash! that was way too long of a wait!

[Hamal: Demos]

First of all...

Great work, how long did it take? a day?

also, is there a background story to the character? or is the character shown part of a race? very cool...

and since I know you like heavy music you won't find too many submissions that are high quality (recording-wise) but I could be wrong, so I'd say go to the audio portal, check out the top 100 metal submissions, and pick a couple that catch your eye

By the way this looks fun if it's a game...

Osuka responds:

Honestly? Took 2 weeks to render all the scenes, i need to learn more of optimization

I will try to check in the portal to see if i find something interesting XD

[Rwd: 021 Meet'n'fuck]

The movie doesn't work

Maybe it's just my computer though
but I thought the Idea was gold, and the voices were funny

It felt like I was listening to the radio, But I still laughed...
I'm sure tomorrow it'll be running smooth again, you rule man!

LazyMuffin responds:

very strange.
thanks anyway.

[MGS: Flash Collab DISC 02]

Is there a 3 on the way?

because if so, I have two different 30 second MG flash Ideas that I could work on right away if I can be a part of it!