Dylawrence's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Edd Egg - Real]

pretty original

that was very entertaining, especially the voices! and I saw it a second time & it had some gags I didn't even notice the first time watching it... kudos man!

[Spongebob SquareDUB!]

Why don't you just fuck off patrick

one of the most hilarious dubs out there... and it looked very smooth, you obviously took time and effort into getting it right...

I'm sure you'll hear this like 20 more times but, the only thing you could work on is lengthening it... and if you can, make the loading time shorter...

or put like a mini-game or something to occupy the viewer! flawless victory man!

DAGamesOfficial responds:

thanx dude. I wanted it to be of the best quality really, so it helps. and the loading time isnt my fault, its the file size, I dontknow how to make the file size smaller. and I never thought of putting in minigames :) might think about it. thanx again :D

[Pallid Fingers 2]

Saw this three years ago...

And I still laugh every time I watch it

You know what really kicks ass about it¿ is that it plays perfectly on the W¡¡

[Haunted House of Terror]

Vibrant!

you probably could've won something if you saved this for the Halloween contest... but you said you don't care for schedules so it's probably not that important, still, it's a great flash nonetheless!

[Trouble Run]

That was fun!

Your animating skills are awesome... made me interested throughout the entire movie... keep at it and you'll be up there with the greats!

I would've liked to see a little more detail in the drawings, but since you say this was for practice then that doesn't really even matter. Keep doing your thing!

[Fight through the sky]

What the hell man?

all you did was put in more audio, no! I gave you a 7 last time I saw this but I said FINISH IT and it'll be a 10! I will admit... the audio does liven it up quite a bit, well I was wasted the last time I saw it and might not have noticed. Kudos either way!

PancakeJesus responds:

It was finished i just compressed the adiou more plus i wasn't satisfied with the score

[Sprite TV 3!]

Work on the pikachu part

here's how it goes down...
"Use flash... and pi-"
then it stops... but very funny until then!

[Heritage]

I enjoyed this!

Pointers... I used audacity on all my flashes, and one thing I've learned with it is <always use subtitles>
it greatly increases replayability because people usually usually focus on them, and if they find the story appealing they watch again to enjoy the animation side, more than the story side.
overall I enjoyed the animation, and got most of the dialogue that was said, good job man!

[Angry Dog - Catchphrase]

"Angry dog... F**ked my chicken!"

so many people are going to be using that catch phrase, I can't wait for the pheromones episode... it's my favorite one because it reminds me of the first GM episode I've ever seen, 'the great weed drought of 03'

Sexual-Lobster responds:

heheh yeh its more similar to my early flashes in writing style, glad you liked it!