Dylawrence's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sprite A Day Revenge: 2]

Didn't know you were still alive, it's good to see the oldschool style truckin along. yet at the same time, I think I've grown out of the spam N' eggs... I don't know. Maybe My tastes have changed nowadays

Horsenwelles responds:

its all about the experience. everyone has changed in 5 years, but who says we cant have another little fiasco again ;)

[Pleasure Island 3]

Fucking awesome as always!

Fernando always had a thing for... "Manly" women. and your trademark sea creature humor never disappoints.

And I'm convinced that Gooseman is Robin with shades!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks, glad you liked it!

[Valdemar VH]

Pretty sweet for a first submission!

Seriously badass art style, although the closeups could be a little better.

you set the atmosphere perfectly, and the voices were believable, but a better mic definitely couldn't hurt!

you should work on drawing more frames in between their movements- (I know it's a bitch, but it would look a lot smoother!)

Oh, and watch your tweens, sometimes their movements are very awkward when coincided with the background

I hope this helps... & keep working on it man!

Kamij responds:

Thanks for your feedback :) I'm hoping to work on the 2nd part over the summer so I'll take more time on it, and make it better :)

[Madness Experimentation]

For what it was...

I'm gonna have to say it was very well done!

I enjoyed the look of it, and despite what you say, the animation has a very nice flow! Also, I never thought of acting it out myself, then animate to that (that would really touch up my FBF)

the low points are obvious, maybe someday this site will get sub-categories for "test" flashes... KUDOS for the effort!

AlmightyHans responds:

yeah im no good at frame by frame so i figured rotoscoping would be the next best bet. ;D

[Bunbun: Puppy Love]

WOAH!!! Caught me off guard!

I was expecting a cuddly lovey-dovey movie, but the turnover of the mood was so sudden that I was in disbelief!

I suppose that was what you were trying to do, and you succeeded... I won't go on about the length because it's a "short" but it did hamper your score a bit.

fluid animation, great joke, nice art, and nice music/sound choices... overall it was a decent little distraction!

Illumatie responds:

I'm happy I caught you off guard, that was were I was going for (: 2 reasons why it wasnt longer: 1- 17 frames a sec is a lot of work. 2- for a longer animation you need a story, I just had this pun, no reason to extend the animation any further in my opinion.

[Aquipod]

Woah dude! you're not half bad...

Things you can improve on, the color, and the audio could use a little bit more work, and more backgrounds wouldn't be bad either...

The lip syncing was phenomenal! and the character animations really shined through...

next year, if you keep progressing, I'm positive you'll be very recognized!

mariomaster123 responds:

thanks bro, it tried making the animation "flow" like egoraptor's
I appreciate the support and the great review!
Cheers

[Is that.. Mario & Luigi?!]

Pretty funny man

I couldn't help but think of cogs of war... pretty much any flash that has small talk makes me laugh... because there's a sense of realism in the characters.

Animation was (as always) very fluid, and easy on the eyes, and the voices fit the subject pretty well, so kudos there.

All in all it was a quick laugh, but if you plan on making a series out of this Idea... I would suggest making different scenes... like maybe you could've shown their new background a little more, so we could get a better sense of where they're at now... or at least put an Easter egg in or two so it would raise the size a bit.

It's a good Idea, and I see it becoming a lot more famous with a couple of changes... Can't wait to see the next one Will!

DAGamesOfficial responds:

thanx dude! Appreciate the positive review. I know I probably should have made it a lot longer, however It's just the matter of drawing the stuff. If I could be bothered, then it would have taken me a month, because everyday I'd draw a bit, and then go "no, fuck it, I cant do anymore" so yeah it's a bit fiddly, if you wanted a longer cartoon, you'd have to wait for like 2 months to pass, and I don't think i like the gaps xP

[Angry Dog - Lizard Tyrant]

YES! I did make a difference!

Joined the demand episode 7... uh, club... the second I found out, and low and behold, a month later it's out and finishes season one of the future best flash series ever!

I Identify with these characters so much, as strange as that sounds, and it's always a thrill to see them in take part in new wacky antics...

The characters you create are so damn likable that I doubt I'll ever stop loving any of your creations

Thanks for creating so many cartoons that I adore so much man, and I hope you become rich with your talents!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks for the kind words and for joining the facebook group, i appreciate it!

and i hope i get rich too but it seems pretty unlikely at this point...

[oney]

HA! Raped by a bear

That was my fav! I loved it, wacky, and full of fun, though I don't know why my part was cracking like the dickens... My bad!

APPY ONEY DAY Y'ALL!

Fawx responds:

slap-happy-dicks.

[COGS OF WAR 2]

Holy shit!

Tops the first one(if there was one ;D)

This should be it's own series, but do you think epic will puss out and bitch about this? Or will they finally realize that this only heightens popularity?

Either way it's definitely a solid, entertaining flash... you can do no wrong!

JohnnyUtah responds:

maybe they should worry about the 50 million video walkthroughs on youtube but knowing them they'll knock on my door first.