Dylawrence's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[man man #0]

Heh... He's an inspirational hero

Because we all can do what he does if we really put effort into it, figured I'd review this since I missed the last one.

The animation didn't feel choppy at all, the voice acting was believable, and with just the right amount of pizazz.

It seems like this Idea can take many turns, and there's a lot to go on, so I'm looking forward to the next ones. Good job overall man!

SonicProvision responds:

thanks man

[TDU#1: Presidents]

Fuck yeah!

A perfect flash to kickstart The Down Under... Giant enemy crab 08!

Jolly good show mate....s

Fawx responds:

SFHIT.

[Console Buddies]

It seems original

I enjoyed the concept, and here's some pointers so you can update it!

Sound-

-Go to the file tab (top left,) publish settings, click on the flash tab, and at the bottom there should be the sound quality. I'd put that at 48 kbps. so there won't be any cracking...

-Make sure all your sound clips used in the flash are set to stream (not event!) That makes sure the sound plays in sync with the animation perfectly, no matter what.
To do this, click on a sound clip on the time frame (with all the keyframes and whatnot) and at the bottom of the screen under "Properties" you should see "Sync" and make sure it says stream next to it...

-Animation

-I noticed you motion tweened the Wii/360 in the Mission Impossible scene from facing left to right. This creates an undesirable squishing effect, and the cause of this is because you used the same symbol, and flipped it horizontally during a tween.
The solution, would be to make each console a symbol were they're facing directly forward, so when they look the other way, have one symbol looking left, switch it with the one facing forward, and then switch that with the first symbol, then just flip it around.

After you make all these changes press Ctrl+Enter to view it the way we will view it on Newgrounds.com after you submit the changed version...

Does that help at all?

I'm giving it an 8 because I believe that with these changes, that's what it deserves... Good job overall guys!

LoveShineHero responds:

Well That helped a whole lot thanks dude! im glad you liked it |Plus penmis

[Brainssss!]

Fun!

I like the Idea, although you might want to consider making each body part it's own symbol, that way it'll have a more fluid motion...

Anything with Zombies in it is badass! I myself am trying to make a zombie series.
Oh! One more tidbit... try to make all your backgrounds bigger than the actual stage itself... that way, you won't have any of the default background color bleeding through. Good effort.

Gflashrunners responds:

Thank you for the comments. I am pleases with this one.
I was wondering when you played it did it play with the audio synced to animation or was the audio too fast? Im just worried it would get out of synque again

[Hamal: Demos]

First of all...

Great work, how long did it take? a day?

also, is there a background story to the character? or is the character shown part of a race? very cool...

and since I know you like heavy music you won't find too many submissions that are high quality (recording-wise) but I could be wrong, so I'd say go to the audio portal, check out the top 100 metal submissions, and pick a couple that catch your eye

By the way this looks fun if it's a game...

Osuka responds:

Honestly? Took 2 weeks to render all the scenes, i need to learn more of optimization

I will try to check in the portal to see if i find something interesting XD

[Rwd: 021 Meet'n'fuck]

The movie doesn't work

Maybe it's just my computer though
but I thought the Idea was gold, and the voices were funny

It felt like I was listening to the radio, But I still laughed...
I'm sure tomorrow it'll be running smooth again, you rule man!

LazyMuffin responds:

very strange.
thanks anyway.

[[Dilemma]]

That was worth it!

HAHA! all I can think of is "Did that really just happen?" kudos man... the animation was fun to watch, and your strong point I believe, would be the lip syncing!

Axeraider67 responds:

lol. thanks.

[Angry Dog - Be My Bitch]

FUCK YEAH!

I swear you are a comedic genius... and I just love it when they party... or at least try to.

Are you ever going to make any more toons with Robin and Fernando? they are my absolute favorite... but George is a close second favorite!

Never stop making flash PLEASE! unless... you know... you don't want to =)

Sexual-Lobster responds:

haha thanks! i'd love to make a new robin and fernando toon, i don't know when i'll get the chance too though

[You Love This Movie]

That's fucking genius!

but does the dude who makes the foamy cartoons really look like that? hilarity ensues in this epic journey...

I feel you can make a sequel to this, maybe all the other popular animations that you didn't use in this one overpower your popular NG status.

I'm sure there's nothing in this review that you haven't already heard before but I want you guys to know that this flash made my day!

RSQViper responds:

Thanks, man. All input is more than welcome.

A sequel would be possible, but that movie would have ot be way shorter or it'd never get done. This one almost didn't get done.

[Angry Dog - Pheromones]

Yeah! My favorite one is out!

I can't get over how funny Georges laugh is, these guys would be awesome to party with!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

i dunno george is a bit of a narc, i'd rather party with horseman